The Dong it's good, but It is noticeable that it wants to create an atmosphere which he does not achieve
I would have put more reverb on everything, especially on drums, But keep going, you're doing well :)

The song is a perfect 11/10, with a melody that constantly varies, excellent mastering, I love the detail that in the final part they go up a few semitones, Giving drama to the song, and making it epic (and closing with a flourish), as for the chosen sounds, they all sound great, but this is the only point where the song "fails" I say this because the sounds used are very similar to those of Dimrain47, and I know that this may be a tribute to him, but it takes away a little of the originality of the song, Removing this small detail, the song turned out great, very epic 11/10 😎

The song is very interesting, it has a powerful bass line that accompanies the melody, I am surprised that this is made with default plugins and samples, good job 10/10 :D